Telechat Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-14
review-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-14-secdir-telechat-shore-2022-02-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 20)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2022-02-15
Requested 2022-01-26
Authors Jaehoon Paul Jeong , Patrick Lingga , Susan Hares , Liang Xia , Henk Birkholz
I-D last updated 2022-02-02
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -04 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -12 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -12 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -14 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -14 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Melinda Shore
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/0kRF6ydnjmhy6Q8y1qXGpIj2xTs
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 20)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-02-02
review-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-14-secdir-telechat-shore-2022-02-02-00
Thank you for the updated draft.  This revision is written much more clearly
and there are other changes, such as the one to the dampening-type, that I
think reduce the likelihood of implementation errors.  I still think a few
words about the limitations of relying on transport security would strengthen
the security considerations but I do think the document is ready to go.