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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-05-03
Requested 2016-04-18
Authors Joe Clarke , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Carlos Pignataro
I-D last updated 2016-05-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Mach Chen (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Les Ginsberg (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Menachem Dodge
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-traceability-08-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-05-02
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-05-02

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This intended status of this document is Informational.

The document

defines an information model for recording interactions between elements
implementing the "Interface to the Routing Systemn" (I2RS) protocol.It

describes a framework for traceability in the I2RS.

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The document is well written.

As section 5.2 is labeled "I2RS Trace Log Mandatory Fields", I am wondering
whether it is allowed to have additional optional fields. For example an
optional "Additional Text" field may be useful, to provide additional
information in certain situations.

I have no issues with the document.

Thank you kindly,

Menachem Dodge