Last Call Review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07
review-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07-opsdir-lc-jiang-2019-04-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-04-01
Requested 2019-03-11
Authors Dr. John C. Klensin
I-D last updated 2019-04-08
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Sheng Jiang
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Tero Kivinen
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Robert Sparks
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 07
Result Ready
Completed 2019-04-08
review-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07-opsdir-lc-jiang-2019-04-08-00
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Has Issues

Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This BCP document provides updates to several position titles by IETF 
   Administrative Support Activity 2.0 (IASA2.0)  structure, and organizational 
   relationships that are referenced elsewhere, and   deprecates some now-obsolete 
   documents to ensure that there is no confusion due to these changes. It is clear 
   and well written. It is ready for publication.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng