Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp-01
review-ietf-isis-fs-lsp-01-opsdir-lc-shore-2014-06-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-06-10
Requested 2014-05-26
Authors Les Ginsberg , Stefano Previdi , Yi Yang
I-D last updated 2018-12-20 (Latest revision 2014-06-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -01 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Melinda Shore
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 02)
Result Has nits
Completed 2014-06-12
review-ietf-isis-fs-lsp-01-opsdir-lc-shore-2014-06-12-00
I have reviewed the document "IS-IS Flooding Scope LSPs"
as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all
IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were
written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

This document introduces new IS-IS flooding scope PDUs, and defines
new TLVs and sub-TLVs with 16-bit type and length fields.  I feel this
document is ready for publication, with a note that RFC 4444 (the IS-IS
MIB) should probably be updated at some point in the future.

Melinda