Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-06-11
Requested 2015-06-08
Authors Michael Jones, Nat Sakimura
Draft last updated 2015-06-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Review review-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05-opsdir-lc-banks-2015-06-30
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-06-30


I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be
included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and
WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05

Summary: Ready to go, no nits, 5 comments (see tools).

Overall, if I were implementing this in code, I'd appreciate the preamble, thanks for the clear description. I also appreciate that the security section was well considered and discussed. I have no major comments, other than that it read like .. an algorithm to me, and I was a bit surprised to see it on the Standards track, rather than informational, but that's just a comment, not a nit or problem. The draft is ready to go.