Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail-05
review-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail-05-opsdir-lc-chown-2023-07-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2023-07-11
Requested 2023-06-27
Authors Corey Bonnell
I-D last updated 2023-10-13 (Latest revision 2023-08-10)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Telechat review of -07 by Tim Wicinski
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Sean Turner (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Tim Chown (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -04 by John R. Levine (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -06 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/oId5M_kpv3i9Z-fNBOnaW_kqSiM
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-07-21
review-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail-05-opsdir-lc-chown-2023-07-21-00
Reviewer: Tim Chown
Review result: Has Issues

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The draft defines an "issuemail" property tag that can be included in a
Relevant Resource Record Set to indicate that the domain is requesting
Certification Authorities restrict the issue of certificates based on the
result of processing the tag as described in the document.

The draft is clearly written and includes appropriate examples of the use of
the tag.

I believe the draft is Ready to progress.