Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis-05
review-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis-05-opsdir-telechat-kuarsingh-2025-03-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2025-03-24
Requested 2025-03-09
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Alicja Kario
I-D last updated 2025-04-29 (Latest revision 2025-04-25)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -05 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Comments 
Please focus on ops implications, clarity/lack/need of deployment/deployability matters, and management considerations. Thank you.
Assignment Reviewer Victor Kuarsingh
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/HcZA_fww46FY5Im3jAG4Wvqgk0Q
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-03-15
review-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis-05-opsdir-telechat-kuarsingh-2025-03-15-00
Reviewer: Victor Kuarsingh
Review Result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document is ready as written.  The current 9579BIS document was intented to
address an Errata from RCF9579.  Section 6 was corrected with the new/updated
text and a new section (Section 9) clarifying the changes from RFC9579. No
further chagnes or NITs are found as part of this review.