Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04
review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04-genart-lc-housley-2019-08-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-08-27
Requested 2019-08-13
Draft last updated 2019-08-15
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Manav Bhatia (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Manav Bhatia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04-genart-lc-housley-2019-08-15
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/h2_aLeDHwZpvDE8jVYlXFe5aLYg
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-08-15

Review
review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04-genart-lc-housley-2019-08-15

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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-08-15
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-27
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

Summary: Ready with Nits

Major Concerns:

None


Minor Concerns:

None


Nits:

Section 3.2.3: The lettered paragraphs at the top of the section
begin with lower case letters, but the lettered paragraphs at the
top of the section begin with upper case letters.  Please be
consistent.

Section 3.2.3: s/time after which the adjacency will now expire/
                /time after which the adjacency will expire/

Section 3.2.3 says:

   ... It
   is therefore useful to signal a planned restart (if the forwarding
   plane on the restarting router is maintained) so that ...

I suggest:

   ... If
   the forwarding plane on the restarting router is maintained, it
   is useful to signal a planned restart so that ...