Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07
review-ietf-manet-credit-window-07-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-credit-window
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-11-28
Requested 2016-11-03
Authors Stan Ratliff
I-D last updated 2024-12-18 (Latest revision 2016-11-13)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Lucy Yong
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Christian Huitema
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder
Tsvart Telechat review of -07 by Michael Scharf
Assignment Reviewer Lucy Yong
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-manet-credit-window by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07
Result Ready
Completed 2016-12-08
review-ietf-manet-credit-window-07-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-08-00
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07

     Credit Windowing extension for DLEP

Reviewer: Lucy Yong

Review Date: 28-Nov-2016

IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016

IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016

Summary: This document specifies a technique for a fine-grained flow control in
radio communication. It is well-written and ready for publishing. Note: 07
version is published recently and is reviewed.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 9.1, revise "If credits are to used on a destination, ...", to make
it readable.

Regards,

Lucy