Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07
review-ietf-manet-credit-window-07-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-08-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-manet-credit-window |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-11-28 | |
Requested | 2016-11-03 | |
Authors | Stan Ratliff | |
I-D last updated | 2016-12-08 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by Lucy Yong
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Christian Huitema Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder Tsvart Telechat review of -07 by Michael Scharf |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Lucy Yong |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-manet-credit-window by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-12-08 |
review-ietf-manet-credit-window-07-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07 Credit Windowing extension for DLEP Reviewer: Lucy Yong Review Date: 28-Nov-2016 IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016 IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016 Summary: This document specifies a technique for a fine-grained flow control in radio communication. It is well-written and ready for publishing. Note: 07 version is published recently and is reviewed. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: In section 9.1, revise "If credits are to used on a destination, ...", to make it readable. Regards, Lucy