Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26
review-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26-genart-lc-kyzivat-2017-07-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 32)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-07-24
Requested 2017-07-03
Authors Christer Holmberg , Roman Shpount
I-D last updated 2017-07-07
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -22 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -22 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -22 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -26 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -27 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -28 by Rich Salz (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -28 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 26 (document currently at 32)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-07-07
review-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26-genart-lc-kyzivat-2017-07-07-00
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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24
IESG Telechat date: TBD

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a few nits that 
should be fixed before publication.

Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  4

(1) NIT:

Section 5.3: s/Eventhough/Even though/

(2) NIT:

Section 8: s/aTLS/a TLS/

(3) NIT:

Section 8: What is the point of including the example? I don't see how 
it adds anything. Perhaps worked out O/A examples contrasting the 
differences between the new and existing cases might be marginally 
helpful. (But IMO not enough to bother with.)

(4) NIT:

Section 10.3.2: s/Througout/throughout/