Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-09-03 | |
Requested | 2015-08-20 | |
Authors | Nobo Akiya , George Swallow , Carlos Pignataro , Loa Andersson , Mach Chen | |
I-D last updated | 2015-08-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Tom Taylor
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Dan Frost (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Tom Taylor |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-08-23 |
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03 Reviewer: Tom Taylor Review Date: 2015-08-21 IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-03 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: Ready with nits. A number of missing "the"s noted but left to the RFC Editor. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: IDNits notes that draft-ietf-mpls-proxy-lsp-ping has now been published as RFC 7555. Sec. 3, third line: s/carry ordered/carry an ordered/ Sec. 3.2, paragraph following bullet 9: s/The responder LSR is to select/The responder LSR MUST (SHOULD?) select/ Begin next sentence with "The".