Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11
review-ietf-netconf-call-home-11-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-10-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-call-home
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-10-07
Requested 2015-09-23
Authors Kent Watsen
I-D last updated 2017-02-22 (Latest revision 2015-12-22)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Simon Josefsson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-call-home by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-10-21
review-ietf-netconf-call-home-11-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-10-21-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015/10/20
IESG Telechat date: 2015/10/22

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I do 
have a comment that you may wish to address.

Minor
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* Section 3.1 S3: The server cannot immediately start the SSH server protocol 
without waiting for SSH connection initiation from the SSH client, right? If 
yes, shouldn't there be an additional condition here?

Thanks
Suresh