Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
review-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22-genart-lc-kyzivat-2024-01-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 28)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-01-24
Requested 2024-01-10
Authors Kent Watsen
I-D last updated 2024-01-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -22 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -24 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -13 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/hI2a8vgOBaDljK3k37xmQaUMB0Y
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 28)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-01-22
review-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22-genart-lc-kyzivat-2024-01-22-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-01-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

Note: This review was cursory because this reviewer is ignorant of Yang, 
and so cannot say anything meaningful about the substance of the document.

NITS: 2

1) NIT: section 1:

s/references truststore instances./references to truststore instances./

2) NIT: section 2.1.3.5

s/containing in inner list/containing an inner list/