Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06
review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-07-12 | |
| Requested | 2016-06-30 | |
| Authors | Christoph Hellwig | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-07-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern
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Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Stephen Kent (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Joel Halpern |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 06 (document currently at 10) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2016-07-06 |
Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 5-July-2016 IETF LC End Date: 12-July-2016 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. The reviewer notes that he fouund the document quite readable, but nonetheless made no effort to review the storage details. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: It seems likely that the cross-reference in section 3.3 paragraph 1 which points to section 2.1 is actually intended to point to section 3.1