Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21
review-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21-opsdir-lc-taylor-2014-09-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-09-29
Requested 2014-09-19
Authors Brian Campbell , Chuck Mortimore , Michael B. Jones
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2014-11-12)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -21 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 23)
Result Has nits
Completed 2014-09-29
review-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21-opsdir-lc-taylor-2014-09-29-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
operational area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Tom Taylor



Summary: Process issue: IDnits complains of a normative reference to 


Informational document RFC 6755. This was NOT noted in the Last Call 


announcement (but was noted in the Shepherd writeup). No operational 


issue identified beyond what is already covered by the Interoperability 


Considerations section.




Editorial Nits:



S2.2: The paragraph before the actual example uses terminology 


inconsistent with RFC 6749:




 s/authorization code grant/authorization grant/