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IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-14
review-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-14-rtgdir-lc-chen-2026-01-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2026-01-06
Requested 2025-12-16
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Carlos Pignataro , Adrian Farrel , Tal Mizrahi
I-D last updated 2026-01-30 (Latest revision 2026-01-28)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Tim Chown (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -14 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Mach Chen (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mach Chen
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/KRdxIeu3B_VyE5F3qLxWg9KwVmU
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2026-01-05
review-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-14-rtgdir-lc-chen-2026-01-05-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-14
Reviewer: Mach Chen
Review Date: 2026-01-06
IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-05
Intended Status: Best Current Practice

Summary:
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:
This document is well-written and easy to read!

Thanks to the authors for writing a very useful document that provides a clear
guidance for future OAM protocols definition and classification!

Major Issues:
None.

Minor Issues:
None.

Nits:
Section 3.3,
"Non-Path-Congruent OAM:

The OAM information is not guaranteed to follow the exact same forwarding path
as the observed data traffic. This can also be called Path-Incongruent OAM."

For the same thing, it's better to use only one term, so I'd suggest to remove
the last sentence: "This can also be called Path-Incongruent OAM".

And If you agree to remove the sentence, please do not forget to remove another
one in Section 3.6.

Best regards,
Mach Chen