Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-06
review-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-06-opsdir-lc-kumari-2013-12-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-10
Requested 2013-11-28
Authors Edward Beili
Draft last updated 2013-12-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Scott Kelly (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Warren Kumari 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-06-opsdir-lc-kumari-2013-12-05
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-12-05

Review
review-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-06-opsdir-lc-kumari-2013-12-05

I have reviewed this document as part of the operations directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
operations area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.


Reviewed version:
Ethernet in the First Mile Copper (EFMCu) Interfaces MIB
draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-06.txt

Summary:  LGTM.

This document updates RFC 5066 by informing the community that one 
of the MIBs is being transferred to the IEEE folk.

The document describes a mapping between the current and IEEE version,
and asserts that they can coexist.
I wouldn't have minded a bit more text describing what folk who currently are
using the EFM-CU-MIB mob should *do* -- can they continue using it forever,
or should they use the IEEE on instead. Guess each operator should make 
their own determination.

It also introduces a security considerations section for IF-CAP-STACK-MIB.

There were a few nits (Standard / Proposed Standard, etc) but they have all been
noted or addressed already.

One question that I had concerns the "lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work".
I don't think that this is a real issue, but figured I'd flag it anyway….

W

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