Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06
review-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06-genart-lc-dupont-2018-10-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-10
Requested 2018-09-26
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Loa Andersson (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06-genart-lc-dupont-2018-10-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ioc5nN-0-5jEzTM5pRhzLcQKd1E
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-10-11
Review completed: 2018-10-11

Review
review-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06-genart-lc-dupont-2018-10-11

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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20181005
IETF LC End Date: 20181010
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
 I reviewed the version 06 but the version 07 is available so I am
trying to update my comments to the last version:
 - Abstract page 1: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling"

 - Requirement Language: usually it is in its own section in the body.
  I leave this to the RFC Editor, i.e. if it should be moved (s)he
  will do this.

 - ToC page 3 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 2: in theory you should introduce the LSA abbrev but as the
  whole document is about OSPF IMHO there is no strict requirement to
  introduce OSPF specific common abbrevs...

 - 1 page 3: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling"
  (note the Abstract is independent so the LLS abbrev should be introduced
   twice and at its first use).

 - Authors' page 7: BE -> Belgium (for consistency with other addresses)

Regards 

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr