Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04
review-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04-genart-lc-romascanu-2017-03-31-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-03-31 | |
Requested | 2017-03-17 | |
Authors | Luca Martini , George Swallow , Elisa Bellagamba | |
I-D last updated | 2017-03-31 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -01
by Adrian Farrel
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Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2017-03-31 |
review-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04-genart-lc-romascanu-2017-03-31-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-?? Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2017-03-31 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-31 IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13 Summary: This document describes a very useful optimization for MPLS LSP PWs operations by defining a method for generating an aggregated PW status message transmitted on a MPLS LSP to indicate the status of the PWs carried on the LSP. The document is clear, detailed and provides all needed information for implementers to write code and for operators to deploy. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 8, first paragraph: s/rages/ranges/ 2. In sections 8.3, 8.4 the construct "IETF Review" is worded in three different ways (IETF review, IETF Review, "IETF Review") - better align