Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pkix-est-07
review-ietf-pkix-est-07-genart-lc-even-2013-06-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pkix-est
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-06-24
Requested 2013-06-13
Authors Max Pritikin , Peter E. Yee , Dan Harkins
I-D last updated 2013-06-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pkix-est-07-genart-lc-even-2013-06-22
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-06-22
review-ietf-pkix-est-07-genart-lc-even-2013-06-22-00
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Document:

draft-ietf-pkix-est-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–6–22

IETF LC End Date: 2013-6–24

IESG Telechat date: 2013-6–27



Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC

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This is not a comment, I read the draft and not being an expert in this area I
found it clear for me to read. The document structure made it easier to read.



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Nits/editorial comments:

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In section 4.5.2 “

to use the the secp384r1 elliptic curve” repeated “the”