Telechat Review of draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture-15
review-ietf-privacypass-architecture-15-artart-telechat-housley-2023-09-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
| Deadline | 2023-09-19 | |
| Requested | 2023-09-13 | |
| Authors | Alex Davidson , Jana Iyengar , Christopher A. Wood | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-09-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Artart Telechat review of -15
by Russ Housley
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Ned Smith (diff) Artart Last Call review of -13 by Russ Housley (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/yn_Q7n4o_KaxtIA8gYKYxDKAgvM | |
| Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2023-09-19 |
review-ietf-privacypass-architecture-15-artart-telechat-housley-2023-09-19-00
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Thanks you for addressing my previous comments on draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture-13. Document: draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture-15 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2023-09-19 IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-03 IESG Telechat date: 2023-09-21 Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: None. Nits: Section 3.2: This section is new since I reviewed version -13. Other sections of this document use "Client". This new text uses "client".