Last Call Review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05
review-ietf-quic-v2-05-artart-lc-gruessing-2022-10-09-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-quic-v2 |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
Deadline | 2022-10-11 | |
Requested | 2022-09-27 | |
Authors | Martin Duke | |
I-D last updated | 2023-05-31 (Latest revision 2022-12-15) | |
Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05
by Joel M. Halpern
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Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Kyle Rose (diff) Artart IETF Last Call review of -05 by James Gruessing (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Bo Wu (diff) Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Vladimír Čunát (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | James Gruessing |
State | Completed | |
Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-quic-v2 by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/QoxT3FUTyZmtLDZOrKGDj8NWWi0 | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2022-10-09 |
review-ietf-quic-v2-05-artart-lc-gruessing-2022-10-09-00
This is my review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05 as part of ART Last Call review. Overall this is a well written document that is clear in its writing, and I have only one minor point of clarification. Section 4.1 - "The client ignores Retry packets using other versions." - is this supposed to be a normative phrase, i.e. "The client SHOULD/MUST ignore Retry packets"? This sentence feels out of place in a paragraph with normative text defining other requirements. Or is this a behaviour defined in VN that I have missed?