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IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription-11
review-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2026-04-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2026-04-13
Requested 2026-03-30
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Henk Birkholz , Eric Voit , Wei Pan
I-D last updated 2026-05-28 (Latest revision 2026-05-26)
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/rEe8_pH5VkO8ijdh_V0LJcPahc4
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2026-04-13
review-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2026-04-13-00
Hi,

I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this
Internet-Draft.

The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related
Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that
adequate operational considerations are covered. While these comments are
primarily for the Operations and Management Area Directors (Ops ADs), the
authors should consider them alongside other feedback received. Comments that
are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

Title: Attestation Event Stream Subscription
Document: draft-ietf-rats-network-device-subscription-11
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2026-04-13

This standard track document defines how to subscribe to YANG Event Streams for
Remote Attestation Procedures (RATS). It is well-written. I do not find any
obvious technical issues or Nits. It is ready for publication as a RFC.

- Ready: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

There is a tiny NITs: it seems that reference [BCP14] should be replaced by
[RFC2119]. It causes complains by our IETF idnits checking system although it
may not be a real NITS.