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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rats-tpm-based-network-device-attest-10

Request Review of draft-ietf-rats-tpm-based-network-device-attest
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-01-19
Requested 2022-01-05
Authors Guy Fedorkow , Eric Voit , Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay
I-D last updated 2022-01-19
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
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Completed 2022-01-19
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Document: draft-ietf-rats-tpm-based-network-device-attest-10
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2022-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

This draft is pretty long, describing the workflow for remote attestation of
the integrity of firmware and software installed on network devices that
contain Trusted Platform Modules.

All the description is the procedures are very clear.

Just curious, what if the Trusted Platform Module on the device is compromised?

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Thank you
Linda Dunbar