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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10
review-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-04-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-03-31
Requested 2021-03-16
Authors Charles E. Perkins , S.V.R Anand , Satish Anamalamudi , Bing (Remy) Liu
Draft last updated 2021-04-22
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -10 by Peter Van der Stok (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-04-22
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KSBJsR4W2QSw3ufpxCoWgHgmeU0
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready with Issues
Completed 2021-04-22
review-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-04-22-00
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Document: draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-04-22
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-31
IESG Telechat date: 2021-04-22

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but
I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
Other than some issues already reported on the list, the draft is a bit hard to
follow, Intro could be improved and the terminology was very long, maybe
presenting terms in category would help.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section B1 says "Reclassified [RFC6998] and [RFC7416] as Informational."
RFC7416 was already Informational. What that a typo?
This is not part of the final RFC - I was just trying to follow the various
diffs of the document.