Early Review of draft-ietf-roll-rnfd-02
review-ietf-roll-rnfd-02-secdir-early-lonvick-2023-12-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-roll-rnfd-02
Requested revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Type Early Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2023-11-30
Requested 2023-11-05
Requested by Ines Robles
Authors Konrad Iwanicki
I-D last updated 2023-12-02
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Victoria Pritchard (diff)
Secdir Early review of -02 by Chris M. Lonvick (diff)
Comments 
We kindly request a Routing and Security Directorate Review of this document,

Thank you very much in advance,

Ines and Dominique
Assignment Reviewer Chris M. Lonvick
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-roll-rnfd by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/OBxjiqSrYF0cTLlBgRCPhVrBwuk
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-12-02
review-ietf-roll-rnfd-02-secdir-early-lonvick-2023-12-02-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

The summary of the review is READY.

First, I've not been following RPL so I read through the draft a few times and
looked at a few of the references to familiarize myself. That is to say that
I'm not an expert at this.

I found the draft explains the concepts well and has an appropriate Security
Considerations section.

A couple of nits:
Section 1.1 discusses what happens when an LBR crashes. In some places, the
section uses the term "dead LBR". However, in other places, it just uses "LBR"
and I can't always tell if it's referring to a live or dead LBR. It would help
to clarify if in each case, it would be designated that the LBR is live, or
dead.

Section 5.5 uses the phrase "sufficiently many messages". As I said, I'm not
familiar with RPL so I don't know how many would be sufficient. Can this be
better quantified?

Also, s/acros/across

Best regards,
Chris