Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-12-12 | |
Requested | 2017-11-28 | |
Authors | Xufeng Liu , Prateek Sarda , Vikram Choudhary | |
I-D last updated | 2017-12-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -02
by Julien Meuric
(diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff) Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Roni Even (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 11) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2017-12-10 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2017-12-10 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12 IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11 Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. in section 4 " type enumeration { enum 1 { description "IS-IS level 1 routes."; } enum 2 { description "IS-IS level 1 routes."; }" enum 2 is IS-IS level 2 routes 2. In Appendix A , the figure with eth0 and the data tree with eth1. Also there is "ipv4-prefix": "198.51.100.0/24" which are not in the figure