Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-28
Authors Xufeng Liu, Prateek Sarda, Vikram Choudhary
Draft last updated 2017-12-10
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Julien Meuric (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-12-10


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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-12-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  in section  4  " type enumeration {
               enum 1 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1 routes.";
               enum 2 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1  routes.";

enum 2 is IS-IS level 2 routes

2. In Appendix A , the figure with eth0 and the data tree with eth1. Also there is "ipv4-prefix": "" which are not in the figure