Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-28
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Julien Meuric (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ByMcbCnkSQ_c8YNLuq1KU4G7Zb8
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2017-12-10
Review completed: 2017-12-10

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06-genart-lc-even-2017-12-10

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-12-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:
The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  in section  4  " type enumeration {
               enum 1 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1 routes.";
               }
               enum 2 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1  routes.";
               }"

enum 2 is IS-IS level 2 routes


2. In Appendix A , the figure with eth0 and the data tree with eth1. Also there is "ipv4-prefix": "198.51.100.0/24" which are not in the figure