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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-11-02
Requested 2018-10-19
Authors Chris Wendt , Mary Barnes
I-D last updated 2018-11-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Francesca Palombini (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francesca Palombini
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2018-11-02
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Document: draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-04
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review Date: 2018-11-02
IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the

Major issues:

* This draft defines the new claim "origid" for the Personal Attestation Token
used in the SHAKEN framework, but does not give any privacy considerations
about it and its use. [RFC6973] suggests that the privacy considerations of
IETF protocols be documented. As required by [RFC7258], work on IETF protocols
needs to consider the effects of pervasive monitoring and mitigate them when
possible. I don't know SHAKEN well enough to comment on privacy issues on that,
but this draft, as part of the IETF work, should have privacy considerations,
particularly considering the "origid" claim.

Minor issues:

* Section 4: the term "verified association" is not defined in this document,
nor in [RFC8225], nor in the SHAKEN spec referenced. Is there a way to clarify
what is meant by it? It could be a reference.

Nits/editorial comments:

* Terminology: I would have appreciated a short sentence mentioning [RFC8225]
in the Terminology section.

* Section 9: [RFC8224] appears without link.

* Acknowledgements: "The authors would like
   acknowledge the work of the ATIS/SIP Forum IP-NNI Task Force to
   develop the concepts behind this document." -> The authors would like to
   acknowledge ...

I do not repeat nits and editorials reported by Adam Roach in his review of
this version of the document (11-19-2018, )