Last Call Review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15
review-ietf-taps-impl-15-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2023-04-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-taps-impl |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 18) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2023-04-14 | |
Requested | 2023-03-30 | |
Authors | Anna Brunstrom , Tommy Pauly , Reese Enghardt , Philipp S. Tiesel , Michael Welzl | |
I-D last updated | 2023-04-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Dnsdir Telechat review of -16
by Peter van Dijk
(diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -16 by Benson Muite (diff) Artart Early review of -12 by Bron Gondwana (diff) Dnsdir Last Call review of -15 by Peter van Dijk (diff) Genart Last Call review of -15 by Dale R. Worley (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Linda Dunbar |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-taps-impl by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/6N_CYivGXlwUXRKaRPkNBEskN5U | |
Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 18) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2023-04-20 |
review-ietf-taps-impl-15-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2023-04-20-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last-call comments. The draft describes the methods (APIs) for applications to call Transport services. It would be nicer if adding a comparison with the existing methods to call TCP/UDP services, such as on Linux you can call connect() to the TCP-socket, or use write(), etc. Thanks, Linda