Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19
review-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19-genart-lc-brim-2014-02-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 21) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-02-18 | |
Requested | 2014-02-06 | |
Authors | David Borman , Robert T. Braden , Van Jacobson , Richard Scheffenegger | |
I-D last updated | 2014-02-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -19
by Scott W. Brim
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -20 by Scott W. Brim (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -19 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -19 by Fred Baker (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Scott W. Brim |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 19 (document currently at 21) | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2014-02-10 |
review-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19-genart-lc-brim-2014-02-10-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2014-02-10 IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-18 IESG Telechat date: not yet Summary: Ready with a minor issue Major issues: none Minor issues: > For brevity, the full discussions of the merits and history behind > the TCP options defined within this document have been omitted. > [RFC1323] should be consulted for reference. The reader is referred to RFC 1323 for background information (basically an informative reference) ... but if this draft obsoletes RFC 1323, can it refer the reader to it? Nits/editorial comments: none Thanks ... Scott