Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19
review-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19-genart-lc-brim-2014-02-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-18
Requested 2014-02-06
Authors David Borman, Robert Braden, Van Jacobson, Richard Scheffenegger
Draft last updated 2014-02-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -19 by Scott Brim (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -20 by Scott Brim (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -19 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -19 by Fred Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Brim
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19-genart-lc-brim-2014-02-10
Reviewed rev. 19 (document currently at 21)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2014-02-10

Review
review-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19-genart-lc-brim-2014-02-10

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Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-19
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 2014-02-10
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-18
IESG Telechat date: not yet

Summary: Ready with a minor issue

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

> For brevity, the full discussions of the merits and history behind
> the TCP options defined within this document have been omitted.
> [RFC1323] should be consulted for reference.

  The reader is referred to RFC 1323 for background information
  (basically an informative reference) ... but if this draft obsoletes
  RFC 1323, can it refer the reader to it?

Nits/editorial comments: none


Thanks ... Scott