Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13
review-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13-genart-lc-bryant-2023-02-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-01-25
Requested 2023-01-11
Authors Praveen Balasubramanian , Yi Huang , Matt Olson
I-D last updated 2023-02-01
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/t0F_6gKPTPrCO6Lo9IvuVwUHY88
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-02-01
review-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13-genart-lc-bryant-2023-02-01-00
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Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2023-02-01
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-25
IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-16

Summary: A well written document ready to do with just one small comment.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: Remembering that this is the GENART review undertaken
as a non-specialist, I am not sure how well known the clamp function is. I had
to look it up, but once I did it was obvious. You might consider a few words to
define it for the reader.