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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-24
review-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-24-opsdir-lc-banks-2021-08-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 28)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-08-02
Requested 2021-07-12
Authors Wesley Eddy
Draft last updated 2021-08-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -24 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -24 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -24 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -25 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -25 by Bernie Volz (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-24-opsdir-lc-banks-2021-08-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/ignf9gQiOY3_s4KDL_aghZiKN_g
Reviewed revision 24 (document currently at 28)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-08-02
review-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-24-opsdir-lc-banks-2021-08-02-00
I’ve reviewed the draft and have no concerns or changes to raise. Since the
draft is replacing RFC 793 and chunks of other documents I found this a bit
awkward, but no more awkward than the spaghetti soup that is TCP across any
number of drafts today, anyhow. Nits is taking forever to run; I’d encourage
the authors to ensure nits is clean. Otherwise, the draft is good to go.

Thanks,
Sarah