Telechat Review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07
review-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07-secdir-telechat-atkins-2018-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-03-06
Requested 2018-02-19
Draft last updated 2018-03-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Matthew Bocci (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Derek Atkins
State Completed
Review review-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07-secdir-telechat-atkins-2018-03-01
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2018-03-01

Review
review-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07-secdir-telechat-atkins-2018-03-01

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving
security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts.  Comments
not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the
IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:

Ready to publish (with minor edits).

Details:

There is a typo in Figure 2 on page 7 where you have two instances of
"Tenant2 Site 2".  I suspect that RBat2 should be labeled Tenant2 Site
1.  The same mistake is in Figure 4 on page 11.

-derek

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       Derek Atkins                 617-623-3745
       derek@ihtfp.com             www.ihtfp.com
       Computer and Internet Security Consultant