Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20
review-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2023-10-31-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 22) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2023-11-02 | |
| Requested | 2023-10-19 | |
| Authors | Bob Briscoe , John Kaippallimalil | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-10-31 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Telechat review of -21
by Brian Haberman
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Artart Last Call review of -20 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Genart Last Call review of -20 by Susan Hares (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -20 by Tim Wicinski (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -20 by Dan Harkins (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tim Wicinski |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/tlShBYoR-CataoqFGX0mYag8Uog | |
| Reviewed revision | 20 (document currently at 22) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2023-10-31 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2023-10-31-00
Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Review Result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. I found the document readable. While this is a detailed document that updates an existing BCP, it adds only a few sentences of text. But I found the collected information very useful to read.