Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20
review-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20-artart-lc-kyzivat-2023-10-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2023-11-02
Requested 2023-10-19
Authors Bob Briscoe , John Kaippallimalil
I-D last updated 2023-10-25
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -21 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -20 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -20 by Susan Hares (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -20 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -20 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/jJEK_HJPd3THXWsbRlEjPiP9lEA
Reviewed revision 20 (document currently at 22)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-10-25
review-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20-artart-lc-kyzivat-2023-10-25-00
Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-20
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-02
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits 
that should be fixed before publication.

This is a clear and well written document. I have no substantive issues.

I ran the IdNits tool and it reported a number of things that should be 
checked and possibly corrected. I won't repeat most of them them here.

Among them were a number of lines with non-ascii characters. I 
investigated these and all seem to be unintentional - apparently a 
non-printing character.