IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang-08
review-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang-08-genart-lc-yee-2026-03-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2026-03-03
Requested 2026-02-17
Authors Yingzhen Qu , Acee Lindem , Eric Kinzie , Don Fedyk , Marc Blanchet
I-D last updated 2026-08-13 (Latest revision 2026-06-10)
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -03 by Xufeng Liu (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir Early review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -05 by Chongfeng Xie (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2026-03-02
review-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang-08-genart-lc-yee-2026-03-02-00
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Document: draft-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang-08
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2026-03-02
IETF LC End Date: 2026-03-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft covers YANG modules for use in the management of networks
where scheduled events may need to be expressed and factored into thing like
routing decisions. The document is mostly YANG, which I have not attempted to
verify. There are very minor nits that could be fixed prior to submission to
the RFC Editor. [Ready with nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: delete the comma after “modules”.

Page 2, Overview, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “ReST” to “REST”.

Page 18, section 6, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: consider insert “the” before
“control plane” and “data plane” or changing both of those to be plural. That
just feels less awkward to read to me, but the sense of the sentence is fine
without modification.

Page 19, section 7, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change “There” to “These”.