Last Call Review of draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05
review-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2024-04-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-04-16
Requested 2024-04-02
Authors Chris M. Lonvick , Sean Turner , Joseph A. Salowey
I-D last updated 2024-04-15
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Qin Wu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Loganaden Velvindron (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-04-15
review-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2024-04-15-00
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Document: draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2024-04-15
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The I-D is ready to be published as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 5, second paragraph uses non-normative "must not use" as opposed to
a "SHOULD NOT use" as in the first paragraph of Section 4.  I suspect this is a
decision borne out by discussions on the UTA WG, so I left it as a nit.  In
case it is an oversight, well, hope the nit helps.

Thanks,

- vijay