Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10
review-ietf-xmpp-dna-10-genart-lc-romascanu-2015-07-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xmpp-dna
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-07-08
Requested 2015-06-25
Authors Peter Saint-Andre , Matthew A. Miller , Philipp Hancke
I-D last updated 2015-11-19 (Latest revision 2015-09-01)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Fred Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-xmpp-dna by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-07-06
review-ietf-xmpp-dna-10-genart-lc-romascanu-2015-07-06-00

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Document: draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 7/6/15

IETF LC End Date: 7/8/15

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Summary:

Ready

Very well written document – as all XMPP documents. Requires a lot of extra
reading for the non-expert, including three non-IETF documents but these are
freely available and all comes together nicely.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

None