Last Call Review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04
review-kivinen-802-15-ie-04-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-kivinen-802-15-ie |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-02-24 | |
| Requested | 2017-02-02 | |
| Requested by | Jean Mahoney | |
| Authors | Tero Kivinen , Pat Kinney | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-02-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -02
by Charles E. Perkins
(diff)
Intdir Early review of -02 by Pascal Thubert (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -04 by Scott O. Bradner (diff) Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Magnus Nyström (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff) Opsdir Early review of -06 by Scott O. Bradner |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-kivinen-802-15-ie by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2017-02-15 |
review-kivinen-802-15-ie-04-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170210 IETF LC End Date: 20170214 IESG Telechat date: 20170224 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3 (title): Benefitting -> Benefiting - 3 page 3 (suggest): CoRE etc, -> CoRE, etc, - 4 page 3: reading the document I had a question about the "no need ... to specify the internal structure" but the reason became clear the next page. So I have no concern about this. Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr