Last Call Review of draft-kucherawy-bcp97bis-03
review-kucherawy-bcp97bis-03-dnsdir-lc-mevzek-2022-10-16-00
| Request | Review of | draft-kucherawy-bcp97bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | DNS Directorate (dnsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-10-17 | |
| Requested | 2022-09-19 | |
| Authors | Murray Kucherawy | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-10-16 | |
| Completed reviews |
Artart Last Call review of -03
by Pete Resnick
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Watson Ladd (diff) Dnsdir Last Call review of -03 by Patrick Mevzek (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Patrick Mevzek |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-kucherawy-bcp97bis by DNS Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/SHRjJ0FpA3XmjAx3wKTcNln-t6g | |
| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2022-10-16 |
review-kucherawy-bcp97bis-03-dnsdir-lc-mevzek-2022-10-16-00
This document does not reference the DNS, and has no considerations that reflect on the DNS. Two unrelated nitpicks: - Last paragraph of section 6, document is misspelled: "that captures the important parts of the intended target docuemnt." - section 4.2 fourth paragraph mentions "Downref Registry"a but it is not explained or given a reference that explains it. Later section 7 is all about "Downref Registry" so maybe that should be referenced from section 4.2