Last Call Review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12
review-murchison-rfc8536bis-12-secdir-lc-roca-2024-04-09-00

Request Review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2024-04-14
Requested 2024-03-17
Authors Arthur David Olson , Paul Eggert , Ken Murchison
I-D last updated 2024-10-31 (Latest revision 2024-05-08)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Marc Blanchet (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vincent Roca
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-murchison-rfc8536bis by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/SkzpZqDD3VzemSg7G4xFjTg9H6w
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-04-09
review-murchison-rfc8536bis-12-secdir-lc-roca-2024-04-09-00
Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready

I just have a minor comment regarding Section 6 "Security Considerations" and 7
"Privacy Considerations". The current draft briefly mentions RFC 7808 whereas
this RFC has very detailed security and privacy sections and is a MUST READ. I
suggest the authors refer to RFC 7808 in both sections for further security or
privacy information in a convincing manner.

Regards,   Vincent