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Last Call Review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12
review-murchison-rfc8536bis-12-genart-lc-even-2024-04-08-00

Request Review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-04-14
Requested 2024-03-17
Authors Arthur David Olson , Paul Eggert , Kenneth Murchison
I-D last updated 2024-04-08
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -12 by Marc Blanchet (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-murchison-rfc8536bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/VqZyw7BUfCL2UcvUTpJ8gbA_PzQ
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-04-08
review-murchison-rfc8536bis-12-genart-lc-even-2024-04-08-00
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Document: draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with a nit

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In appendix B2 I noticed that the order of ut/local and standard/wall has
changed comparing to RFC8536 but did not see any mention of the change in
appendix D. Is this on purpose?