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Last Call Review of draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-improvements-02

Request Review of draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-improvements
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-03-01
Requested 2016-01-25
Authors Robert Sparks
I-D last updated 2016-02-27
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Ralph Droms
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Charlie Kaufman
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Jon Mitchell
Assignment Reviewer Jon Mitchell
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-improvements by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 02
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-02-27
I have reviewed draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-improvements-02 as part of the
Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the
intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments
that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during
the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

I found the document is clear and Ready, however I did not do
independent verification of the claimed issues with the current tool
during my review.

This is a Informational individual draft which contains various user
level requirements for an update to IETF email search archive tool.

Nits -

Acknowledgments - Please remove the 2nd paragraph of Acknowledgments as
it's not noted for the RFC Editor to do it and it may be missed now that
last call is over.

References - it would seem to me that knowledge of the current tool
behavior would be Normative since all the requirements are expressed as
a difference to it's behavior, more so than the original RFC.