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Last Call Review of draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-02
review-tenoever-tao-retirement-02-opsdir-lc-romascanu-2024-02-12-00

Request Review of draft-tenoever-tao-retirement
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-02-22
Requested 2024-01-25
Authors Niels ten Oever , Greg Wood
I-D last updated 2024-06-21 (Latest revision 2024-02-26)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-tenoever-tao-retirement by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/Tua7FdSDzBwEalxrskZsZHpBsK8
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 04)
Result Has nits
Completed 2024-02-12
review-tenoever-tao-retirement-02-opsdir-lc-romascanu-2024-02-12-00
This document retires and obsoletes the Tao of the IETF as an IETF-maintained
document.It includes the rationale for the retirement and the last edition of
the Tao as published via the processdescribed in RFC 6722. I see no operational
or manageability issues with retiring the Tao of the IETF. This document is
READY, but there are some nits. The most obvious one i that Section 2.1 messes
some of the dates and RFC numbers. I suggest the following edit:

OLD:

   The Tao was originally published as [RFC1391] in January 1993.  In
   the following 17 years, four additional versions of the Tao were
   published as RFCs: [RFC1539] in October 1998, [RFC1718] in November
   1994, [RFC3160] in August 2001, and [RFC4677] in September 2006.  In
   August 2012, [RFC4677] was published to document the process for
   publishing the Tao as a webpage so that it “can be updated more
   easily”.

NEW:

   The Tao was originally published as [RFC1391] in January 1993.  In
   the following 17 years, four additional versions of the Tao were
   published as RFCs: [RFC1539] in October 1993, [RFC1718] in November
   1994, [RFC3160] in August 2001, and [RFC4677] in September 2006.  In
   August 2012, [RFC6722] was published to document the process for
   publishing the Tao as a webpage so that it “can be updated more
   easily”.