Last Call Review of draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request-

Request Review of draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-15
Requested 2011-11-01
Authors Jason Weil, Victor Kuarsingh, Chris Donley, Christopher Liljenstolpe, Marla Azinger
Draft last updated 2011-11-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
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Genart Telechat review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Yaron Sheffer
Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by Dan Wing
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-weil-shared-transition-space-request-genart-lc-dupont-2011-11-01
Review completed: 2011-11-01


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.

Document: draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20110827
IETF LC End Date: 20110916
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Almost Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None (but need feed back from IANA)

Nits/editorial comments:
 - the text uses both assignment and allocation terms, they are not
 really equivalent so I recommend to ask IANA to check and if needed
 to fix the use of these terms. Anyway this document is for IANA!

 - authors' list page 1: LILJENSTOLPE -> Liljenstolpe

 - ToC page 2 and Appendix A page 10: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 4 page 6: Infrastructure provider use -> Infrastructure Provider use

 - 4 page 6: e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 7 page 9: I don't like to get RFC 2119 in informative references

 - Authors' Addresses pages 11 and 12:
  * AU -> Australia

  * please remove empty Fax and URI

  * US -> USA (if it is really the other Vancouver :-)


Francis.Dupont at

PS: IMHO this prefix could be a great help in NAT444 and similar device
operation, so I support it.
PPS: the Almost before Ready doesn't mean the document needs to be changed now,
just the IANA should provide her comments first.