Telechat Review of draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request-
review-weil-shared-transition-space-request-genart-telechat-dupont-2012-02-06-00
Request | Review of | draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-02-14 | |
Requested | 2012-02-02 | |
Authors | Jason Weil , Victor Kuarsingh , Chris Donley , Christopher Liljenstolpe , Marla Azinger | |
I-D last updated | 2012-02-06 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Francis Dupont
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont Genart Telechat review of -?? by Francis Dupont Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Yaron Sheffer Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by Dan Wing |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-02-06 |
review-weil-shared-transition-space-request-genart-telechat-dupont-2012-02-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-weil-shared-transition-space-request-14.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120208 IETF LC End Date: 20120216 IESG Telechat date: 20120216 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None (but with proposed changes agreed during the (last) last call applied) Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 4: the CPE abbrev is not well known so should be introduced (or marked as well known as there are more and more documents in this area) - 4 page 7: my dictionary says the word proscription exists only singular, i.e., proscriptions -> proscription Personal comments: - I am in favor of this document (as explained by some in the IETF ML, other solutions are worse) - I have no illusion about how it will be applied in the real world - this document and many others about CGN/LSN make the dangerous assumption there will be only one level of CGN/LSN - to delay the application of the document (i.e., the allocation of the shared address space) long enough there will be no /10 available should be a very unfair way to (not) solve the problem (:-) Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr