Last Call Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05
review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05-opsdir-lc-martinez-2017-10-12-00

Request Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-10-11
Requested 2017-09-13
Authors Qin Wu , Stephane Litkowski , Luis Tomotaki , Kenichi Ogaki
I-D last updated 2017-10-12
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Lou Berger (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos M. Martínez (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Jari Arkko (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos M. Martínez
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-10-12
review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05-opsdir-lc-martinez-2017-10-12-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

With the caveat that I'm not an expert, I've found this document to be READY.

I have found it well-written (those parts that require actual prose) and
adequately referenced since it relies heavily on other documents.

Authors, please do remember to remove all non-final text before re-sending.

Thanks!

/Carlos