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L2VPN Service Model
charter-ietf-l2sm-01

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Date Rev. By Action
2018-03-21
01 Cindy Morgan Responsible AD changed to Ignas Bagdonas from Benoit Claise
2016-11-04
01 Cindy Morgan New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-01.txt
2016-11-04
01 Cindy Morgan State changed to Approved from External review
2016-11-04
01 Cindy Morgan IESG has approved the charter
2016-11-04
01 Cindy Morgan Closed "Approve" ballot
2016-11-04
01 Cindy Morgan Closed "Ready for external review" ballot
2016-11-04
00-07 Cindy Morgan WG action text was changed
2016-11-03
00-07 Benoît Claise [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Benoit Claise
2016-11-03
00-07 Stephen Farrell [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Stephen Farrell
2016-11-03
00-07 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-07.txt
2016-11-03
00-06 Jari Arkko [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jari Arkko
2016-11-02
00-06 Joel Jaeggli [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Joel Jaeggli
2016-11-02
00-06 Ben Campbell [Ballot comment]
A strictly editorial comment:

The second sentence in the third paragraph would benefit from being broken into a few shorter sentences.
2016-11-02
00-06 Ben Campbell [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ben Campbell
2016-11-02
00-06 Suresh Krishnan [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Suresh Krishnan
2016-11-02
00-06 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06.txt
2016-11-02
00-05 Deborah Brungard [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Deborah Brungard
2016-11-02
00-05 Alvaro Retana [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alvaro Retana
2016-11-02
00-05 Alissa Cooper [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alissa Cooper
2016-11-01
00-05 Spencer Dawkins
[Ballot comment]
I have a few editorial suggestions.

I think "full system configuration that enable service agility" should be s/enable/enables/.

I think "recognized it would …
[Ballot comment]
I have a few editorial suggestions.

I think "full system configuration that enable service agility" should be s/enable/enables/.

I think "recognized it would be beneficial" would be better as "recognized that it would be beneficial".

I think you can drop "attempt to" from "The working group will attempt to derive a single data model". That should be possible, especially if the working group has L3SM for guidance.

I think "(that work is expected to be carried out in other protocol-specific working groups)" would be easier to read as a separate sentence, not as a parenthetical insertion.
2016-11-01
00-05 Spencer Dawkins [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Spencer Dawkins
2016-11-01
00-05 Terry Manderson [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Terry Manderson
2016-11-01
00-05 Alia Atlas [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Alia Atlas
2016-10-31
00-05 Kathleen Moriarty [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Kathleen Moriarty
2016-10-20
00-05 Benoît Claise Telechat date has been changed to 2016-11-03 from 2016-10-27
2016-10-19
00-05 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-05.txt
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan Telechat date has been changed to 2016-10-27 from 2016-10-13
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan WG new work message text was changed
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan WG review text was changed
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan WG review text was changed
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan WG review text was changed
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan New version to move milestones out of the charter text and into the milestone tool.
2016-10-14
00-04 Cindy Morgan New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-04.txt
2016-10-14
00-03 Cindy Morgan Added charter milestone "Close working group", due December 2017
2016-10-14
00-03 Cindy Morgan Added charter milestone "Request publication of data model as Standards Track RFC", due October 2017
2016-10-14
00-03 Cindy Morgan Added charter milestone "Adopt WG draft for data model", due December 2016
2016-10-14
00-03 Benoît Claise Created "Approve" ballot
2016-10-14
00-03 Benoît Claise State changed to External review from Internal review
2016-10-14
00-03 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-03.txt
2016-10-14
00-02 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-02.txt
2016-10-13
00-01 Joel Jaeggli [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Joel Jaeggli
2016-10-13
00-01 Ben Campbell [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ben Campbell
2016-10-13
00-01 Alia Atlas
[Ballot comment]
I am surprised not to see EVPN included in the list of technologies, since it is a replacement for VPLS.
I understand that …
[Ballot comment]
I am surprised not to see EVPN included in the list of technologies, since it is a replacement for VPLS.
I understand that the service model should be fairly technology independent, but if it can't handle EVPN,
that'll be an issue.  Could you please update it to at least mention EVPN as one of the technologies?
2016-10-13
00-01 Alia Atlas [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alia Atlas
2016-10-13
00-01 Stephen Farrell [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Stephen Farrell
2016-10-13
00-01 Mirja Kühlewind [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Mirja Kühlewind
2016-10-13
00-01 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-01.txt
2016-10-12
00-00 Jari Arkko [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jari Arkko
2016-10-12
00-00 Kathleen Moriarty [Ballot comment]
There is a typo in the first paragraph
s/onfiguration/configuration/
2016-10-12
00-00 Kathleen Moriarty [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Kathleen Moriarty
2016-10-12
00-00 Alissa Cooper [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alissa Cooper
2016-10-11
00-00 Suresh Krishnan [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Suresh Krishnan
2016-10-11
00-00 Deborah Brungard [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Deborah Brungard
2016-10-10
00-00 Spencer Dawkins [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Spencer Dawkins
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Benoit Claise
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise WG action text was changed
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise WG review text was changed
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise WG review text was changed
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise Created "Ready for external review" ballot
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise State changed to Internal review from Informal IESG review
2016-10-10
00-00 Benoît Claise Placed on agenda for telechat - 2016-10-13
2016-09-15
00-00 Benoît Claise Initial review time expires 2016-09-29
2016-09-15
00-00 Benoît Claise Not sure where to insert the correct state, but it should be "internal review"
2016-09-15
00-00 Benoît Claise State changed to Informal IESG review from Not currently under review
2016-09-15
00-00 Benoît Claise New version available: charter-ietf-l2sm-00-00.txt