Transmission of IPv4 Packets over the IP Convergence Sublayer of IEEE 802.16
draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-07
Yes
(Jari Arkko)
(Ralph Droms)
No Objection
(Cullen Jennings)
(Dan Romascanu)
(Lars Eggert)
(Lisa Dusseault)
(Robert Sparks)
(Ron Bonica)
(Ross Callon)
(Russ Housley)
(Tim Polk)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 07 and is now closed.
Jari Arkko Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
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Ralph Droms Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
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Adrian Farrel Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2009-11-28)
Unknown
A few comments all at the level of nits... --- Sections 1 and 5.2 In section 1 This document also discusses ARP (Address Resolution Protocol) and Multicast Address Mapping. Well, section 5.2 contains precisely 2 lnes and two words to say that ARP is not used. --- Section 2 As far as I can see, the terms "Subscriber station (SS)" and "Mobile Node (MN)" are not used in the document at all. --- Section 3 para 1 You have shown "(AR)" twice --- Section 4.3 s/if an MS/If an MS/ --- Appendix D s/advertisemnet/advertisement/
Alexey Melnikov Former IESG member
(was Discuss, No Objection)
No Objection
No Objection
(2009-11-28)
Unknown
4.2. Frame Format for IPv4 Packets
0 1
0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5
+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
|H|E| TYPE |R|C|EKS|R|LEN |
+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
| LEN LSB | CID MSB |
+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
| CID LSB | HCS |
+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
Nit: it would be nicer to readers to say that MSB means "Most Significant Byte" and LSB means "Less Significant Byte".
Cullen Jennings Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Dan Romascanu Former IESG member
(was Discuss)
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Lars Eggert Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Lisa Dusseault Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
()
Unknown
Magnus Westerlund Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2009-12-01)
Unknown
Section 4.2: C: CRC Indicator. 1 = CRC is included, 0 = 1 No CRC is included It looks confusing that 0 = 1, I guess the 1 can be removed.
Robert Sparks Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Ron Bonica Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Ross Callon Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Russ Housley Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Tim Polk Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown