Update to the ipn URI scheme
draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-10
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2024-03-21
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10 | Erik Kline | Changed action holders to Erik Kline |
2024-03-18
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10 | Liz Flynn | Shepherding AD changed to Erik Kline |
2024-02-21
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10 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA - Not OK |
2024-02-21
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10 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-10.txt |
2024-02-21
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10 | (System) | New version approved |
2024-02-21
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10 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2024-02-21
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10 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2024-02-13
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09 | Tim Wicinski | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Tim Wicinski. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2024-02-13
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09 | Tim Wicinski | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Tim Wicinski. |
2024-02-12
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09 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call |
2024-02-10
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09 | Marco Tiloca | Request for Last Call review by ARTART Completed: Ready with Nits. Reviewer: Marco Tiloca. Sent review to list. |
2024-02-08
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09 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Not OK from IANA - Review Needed |
2024-02-08
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09 | David Dong | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-09. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. IANA … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: IANA has completed its review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-09. If any part of this review is inaccurate, please let us know. IANA has a question about the first and second actions requested in the IANA Considerations section of this document. IANA understands that, upon approval of this document, there are four actions which we must complete. First, a new registry is to be created called the 'ipn' Scheme URI Allocator Identifiers registry. The new registry will be located in the Bundle Protocol registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bundle/ The registration policy for the new registry (as defined by RFC 8126) is: 0 - 65535: Expert Review, Single Allocator Identifiers only 65536 - 1073741823: Expert Review 1073741824 - 2147483647: Experimental Use 2147483648 - 4294967295: Reserved for Future Expansion 4294967296 and above: Reserved The "Single Allocator Identifiers only" language in the Registration Policy for this registry indicates that, within the indicated range, the allocation of a sequence of consecutive Allocator identifiers to a single organization is prohibited. IANA Question --> Should this be added as a note to the new registry? The reference for the new registry will be [ RFC-to-be ]. There are two initial registrations in the new registry as follows: Name: Default Allocator (Section 3.2.2) Range (dec): 0 Range (hex): 0x0 Range Length (Bits): 0 Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] Point of Contact: IANA Name: Example Range Range (dec): 974848 - 978943 Range (hex): 0xEE000 - 0xEEFFF Range Length (Bits): 12 bits Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] Point of Contact: IANA Second, the existing registry called the CBHE Node Numbers registry in the Bundle Protocol registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bundle/ is to be renamed as the: 'ipn' Scheme URI Default Allocator Node Numbers registry. IANA Question --> Should the reference for this registry be changed to [ RFC-to-be ] or should [ RFC-to-be ] be added to the existing reference for the registry? Third, in the newly renamed 'ipn' Scheme URI Default Allocator Node Numbers registry in the Bundle Protocol registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bundle/ the registration policy (as per RFC 8126) is changed to: 0: Reserved for the Null ipn URI ([ RFC-to-be; Section 3.1]) 1 - 16383: Private Use 16384 - 4294967294: Expert Review 4294967295: Reserved for LocalNode ipn URIs ([ RFC-to-be; Section 3.4.2]) 4294967295 and above: invalid Fourth, a new registry is to be created called the 'ipn' Scheme URI Well-known Service Numbers for BPv7 registry. The new registry will be located in the Bundle Protocol registry group located at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bundle/ The registration policy for the new registry (as defined by RFC 8126) is: 0: Reserved for the Administrative Endpoint ([ RFC-to-be; Section 5.7]) 1 - 127 Private Use 128 - 255: Standards Action 256 - 32767: Private Use 32768 - 65535: Specification Required 65536 - 4294967295: Private Use 4294967296 and above: Reserved for future expansion There are two initial registrations in the new registry as follows: Value: 0 Description: The Administrative Endpoint ([ RFC-to-be; Section 5.7]) Reference: [RFC9171], [ RFC-to-be ] Value: 0xEEE0 - 0xEEEF Description: Example Range Reference: [ RFC-to-be ] We understand that these are the only actions required to be completed upon approval of this document. NOTE: The actions requested in this document will not be completed until the document has been approved for publication as an RFC. This message is meant only to confirm the list of actions that will be performed. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist |
2024-02-06
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09 | Barry Leiba | Request for Last Call review by ARTART is assigned to Marco Tiloca |
2024-02-02
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09 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Derek Atkins |
2024-02-01
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09 | Russ Housley | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Not Ready. Reviewer: Russ Housley. Sent review to list. |
2024-02-01
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09 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Russ Housley |
2024-01-31
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09 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Tim Wicinski |
2024-01-29
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09 | Cindy Morgan | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2024-01-29
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09 | Cindy Morgan | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-02-12): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update@ietf.org, dtn-chairs@ietf.org, dtn@ietf.org, sburleig.sb@gmail.com, zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2024-02-12): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update@ietf.org, dtn-chairs@ietf.org, dtn@ietf.org, sburleig.sb@gmail.com, zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (Update to the ipn URI scheme) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the Delay/Disruption Tolerant Networking WG (dtn) to consider the following document: - 'Update to the ipn URI scheme' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2024-02-12. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document updates both the specification of the ipn URI scheme previously defined in RFC 7116 and the rules for encoding of these URIs when used as an Endpoint Identifier (EID) in Bundle Protocol Version 7 (BPv7) as defined in RFC 9171. These updates update and clarify the structure and behavior of the ipn URI scheme, define encodings of ipn scheme URIs, and establish the registries necessary to manage this scheme. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. |
2024-01-29
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09 | Cindy Morgan | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2024-01-29
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Last call was requested |
2024-01-29
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Ballot approval text was generated |
2024-01-29
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Ballot writeup was generated |
2024-01-29
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from Publication Requested |
2024-01-29
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Last call announcement was generated |
2024-01-16
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09 | Rick Taylor | Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 # Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus … Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 # Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? >> There was extensive discussion on the mailing list among over two dozen working group members. The document reflects broad agreement among the members. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? >> Discussion of some detailed points of the specification was spirited but agreement was reached. The main point of contention initially was whether to define an entirely new ipn URI specification with a 128-bit namespace or, alternatively, to retain the existing 64-bit namespace (to preserve compatibility with existing implementations and deployments) and instead simply define CBOR and textual encodings that would provide the required capabilities. In the end the latter position was adopted. There was also especially lively dispute over governance considerations, i.e., how exactly would node numbers be assigned by allocators? It was decided this topic properly belonged in a separate draft, as future work. It was removed, enabling consensus on the technical issues to be achieved and the document to progress. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) >> I am not aware of any such extreme discontent. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as RFC 7942 recommends) or elsewhere (where)? >> There are as yet no known implementations of the ipn URI scheme update described in this document. Three implementers are known to be planning to make these modifications. # Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. >> The ipn URI scheme is not known at this time to be utilized by any technologies other than Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN); IETF working groups other than the DTN WG have not reviewed the document. The DTN Working Group of the Consultative Committee for Space Data Systems (CCSDS) reviewed the document in email and at WG meetings between October 2022 and August 2023, offered comments, and has determined that these modifications preserve interoperability with the CCSDS profile of Bundle Protocol version 7 (BPv7). 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. >> No formal expert reviews were found to be applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the recommended validation tools for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in RFC 8342? >> The document does not contain a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. >> Appendix A of the document defines the syntax of the revised ipn URI scheme in ABNF representation. The IETF ABNF validator tool at https://author-tools.ietf.org/abnf was used to validate that syntax. Appendix C details the CDDL definitions that are applicable to this document. The definitions were reviewed by Carsten Bormann. Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? >> Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? >> Only the common issues identified for the Transport area are relevant, specifically only the IANA Considerations issue. This issue is addressed: no codepoints are identified in this document other than ‘0’, which is administratively defined. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream (Best Current Practice, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? >> Publication as a Proposed Standard is requested. The specification is intended to be Standards Track eventually but has not yet been implemented. The Datatracker state attributes reflect the intent correctly. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in BCP 79? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. >> All authors have been reminded of the disclosure obligations described in BCP 79. To the best of my knowledge, all required disclosures have been filed and there was no relevant discussion. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. >> The document has two authors, both of whom have declared that they are willing to be listed as such. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the idnits tool is not enough; please review the "Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) >> Nits identified by the idnits tool have been addressed. No distinct Summary of Changes section is included, but the changes from RFC 7116 are summarized in the Introduction. The sole erratum against RFC 7116 was documented by one of the authors of the present document and has been addressed in this new specification. However, the I-D does not state explicitly that it addresses that erratum. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References. >> All references are correctly documented. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? >> All normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see RFC 3967 and BCP 97) that are not already listed in the DOWNREF registry? If so, list them. >> There are no normative downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? >> There are no normative references to documents whose status is unclear. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. >> Publication of this document will update RFCs 9171 and 7116, as noted in the document. The Datatracker metadata does not yet reflect this. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see RFC 8126). >> The IANA Considerations section is consistent with the document’s content. No IANA assignments are requested. Referenced IANA registries are clearly identified. New IANA registries for which creation is requested are identified by reasonable names, and their allocation procedures and initial contents are specified. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. >> The newly requested IANA "'ipn' Scheme URI Allocator Identifiers" registry requires Designated Expert review for future allocations. Clear instructions to the Designated Expert are provided. |
2024-01-16
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09 | Rick Taylor | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Document |
2024-01-16
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09 | Rick Taylor | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2024-01-16
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09 | (System) | Changed action holders to Zaheduzzaman Sarker (IESG state changed) |
2024-01-16
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09 | Rick Taylor | Responsible AD changed to Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2024-01-16
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09 | Rick Taylor | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
2023-12-11
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 # Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus … Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 # Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? >> There was extensive discussion on the mailing list among over two dozen working group members. The document reflects broad agreement among the members. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? >> Discussion of some detailed points of the specification was spirited but agreement was reached. The main point of contention initially was whether to define an entirely new ipn URI specification with a 128-bit namespace or, alternatively, to retain the existing 64-bit namespace (to preserve compatibility with existing implementations and deployments) and instead simply define CBOR and textual encodings that would provide the required capabilities. In the end the latter position was adopted. There was also especially lively dispute over governance considerations, i.e., how exactly would node numbers be assigned by allocators? It was decided this topic properly belonged in a separate draft, as future work. It was removed, enabling consensus on the technical issues to be achieved and the document to progress. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) >> I am not aware of any such extreme discontent. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as RFC 7942 recommends) or elsewhere (where)? >> There are as yet no known implementations of the ipn URI scheme update described in this document. Three implementers are known to be planning to make these modifications. # Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. >> The ipn URI scheme is not known at this time to be utilized by any technologies other than Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN); IETF working groups other than the DTN WG have not reviewed the document. The DTN Working Group of the Consultative Committee for Space Data Systems (CCSDS) reviewed the document in email and at WG meetings between October 2022 and August 2023, offered comments, and has determined that these modifications preserve interoperability with the CCSDS profile of Bundle Protocol version 7 (BPv7). 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. >> No formal expert reviews were found to be applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the recommended validation tools for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in RFC 8342? >> The document does not contain a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. >> Appendix A of the document defines the syntax of the revised ipn URI scheme in ABNF representation. The IETF ABNF validator tool at https://author-tools.ietf.org/abnf was used to validate that syntax. Appendix C details the CDDL definitions that are applicable to this document. The definitions were reviewed by Carsten Bormann. Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? >> Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? >> Only the common issues identified for the Transport area are relevant, specifically only the IANA Considerations issue. This issue is addressed: no codepoints are identified in this document other than ‘0’, which is administratively defined. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream (Best Current Practice, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? >> Publication as a Proposed Standard is requested. The specification is intended to be Standards Track eventually but has not yet been implemented. The Datatracker state attributes reflect the intent correctly. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in BCP 79? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. >> All authors have been reminded of the disclosure obligations described in BCP 79. To the best of my knowledge, all required disclosures have been filed and there was no relevant discussion. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. >> The document has two authors, both of whom have declared that they are willing to be listed as such. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the idnits tool is not enough; please review the "Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) >> Nits identified by the idnits tool have been addressed. No distinct Summary of Changes section is included, but the changes from RFC 7116 are summarized in the Introduction. The sole erratum against RFC 7116 was documented by one of the authors of the present document and has been addressed in this new specification. However, the I-D does not state explicitly that it addresses that erratum. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References. >> All references are correctly documented. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? >> All normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see RFC 3967 and BCP 97) that are not already listed in the DOWNREF registry? If so, list them. >> There are no normative downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? >> There are no normative references to documents whose status is unclear. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. >> Publication of this document will update RFCs 9171 and 7116, as noted in the document. The Datatracker metadata does not yet reflect this. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see RFC 8126). >> The IANA Considerations section is consistent with the document’s content. No IANA assignments are requested. Referenced IANA registries are clearly identified. New IANA registries for which creation is requested are identified by reasonable names, and their allocation procedures and initial contents are specified. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. >> The newly requested IANA "'ipn' Scheme URI Allocator Identifiers" registry requires Designated Expert review for future allocations. Clear instructions to the Designated Expert are provided. |
2023-12-11
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09 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent … Document Shepherd Writeup for Update to the ipn URI scheme Scott Burleigh 25 December 2023 Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? There was extensive discussion on the mailing list among over two dozen working group members. The document reflects broad agreement among the members. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Discussion of some detailed points of the specification was spirited but agreement was reached. The main point of contention initially was whether to define an entirely new ipn URI specification with a 128-bit namespace or, alternatively, to retain the existing 64-bit namespace (to preserve compatibility with existing implementations and deployments) and instead simply define CBOR and textual encodings that would provide the required capabilities. In the end the latter position was adopted. There was also especially lively dispute over governance considerations, i.e., how exactly would node numbers be assigned by allocators? It was decided this topic properly belonged in a separate draft, as future work. It was removed, enabling consensus on the technical issues to be achieved and the document to progress. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) I am not aware of any such extreme discontent. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as RFC 7942 recommends) or elsewhere (where)? There are as yet no known implementations of the ipn URI scheme update described in this document. Three implementers are known to be planning to make these modifications. Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. The ipn URI scheme is not known at this time to be utilized by any technologies other than Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN); IETF working groups other than the DTN WG have not reviewed the document. The DTN Working Group of the Consultative Committee for Space Data Systems (CCSDS) reviewed the document in email and at WG meetings between October 2022 and August 2023, offered comments, and has determined that these modifications preserve interoperability with the CCSDS profile of Bundle Protocol version 7 (BPv7). 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No formal expert reviews were found to be applicable. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the recommended validation tools for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in RFC 8342? The document does not contain a YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. Appendix A of the document defines the syntax of the revised ipn URI scheme in ABNF representation. The IETF ABNF validator tool at https://author-tools.ietf.org/abnf was used to validate that syntax. Appendix C details the CDDL definitions that are applicable to this document. The definitions were reviewed by Carsten Bormann. Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Yes. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? Only the common issues identified for the Transport area are relevant, specifically only the IANA Considerations issue. This issue is addressed: no codepoints are identified in this document other than ‘0’, which is administratively defined. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream (Best Current Practice, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental or Historic)? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Publication as a Proposed Standard is requested. The specification is intended to be Standards Track eventually but has not yet been implemented. The Datatracker state attributes reflect the intent correctly. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in BCP 79? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. All authors have been reminded of the disclosure obligations described in BCP 79. To the best of my knowledge, all required disclosures have been filed and there was no relevant discussion. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. The document has two authors, both of whom have declared that they are willing to be listed as such. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the idnits tool is not enough; please review the "Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) Nits identified by the idnits tool have been addressed. No distinct Summary of Changes section is included, but the changes from RFC 7116 are summarized in the Introduction. The sole erratum against RFC 7116 was documented by one of the authors of the present document and has been addressed in this new specification. However, the I-D does not state explicitly that it addresses that erratum. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References. All references are correctly documented. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? All normative references are RFCs. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see RFC 3967 and BCP 97) that are not already listed in the DOWNREF registry? If so, list them. There are no normative downward references. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references to documents whose status is unclear. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. Publication of this document will update RFCs 9171 and 7116, as noted in the document. The Datatracker metadata does not yet reflect this. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see RFC 8126). The IANA Considerations section is consistent with the document’s content. No IANA assignments are requested. Referenced IANA registries are clearly identified. New IANA registries for which creation is requested are identified by reasonable names, and their allocation procedures and initial contents are specified. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. The newly requested IANA "'ipn' Scheme URI Allocator Identifiers" registry requires Designated Expert review for future allocations. Clear instructions to the Designated Expert are provided. |
2023-12-04
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09 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-09.txt |
2023-12-04
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09 | Rick Taylor | New version approved |
2023-12-04
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09 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-12-04
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09 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-12-04
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09 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-12-04
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09 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-11-22
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08 | Rick Taylor | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2023-11-22
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08 | Rick Taylor | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
2023-11-22
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08 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-08.txt |
2023-11-22
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08 | (System) | New version approved |
2023-11-22
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08 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-11-22
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08 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-11-21
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07 | Edward Birrane | Notification list changed to sburleig.sb@gmail.com because the document shepherd was set |
2023-11-21
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07 | Edward Birrane | Document shepherd changed to Scott Burleigh |
2023-11-06
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07 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-07.txt |
2023-11-06
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07 | (System) | New version approved |
2023-11-06
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07 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-11-06
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07 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-11-02
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06 | Adam Wiethuechter | Added to session: IETF-118: dtn Tue-1200 |
2023-07-25
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06 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-06.txt |
2023-07-25
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06 | Rick Taylor | New version approved |
2023-07-25
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06 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-07-25
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06 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-07-21
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05 | Adam Wiethuechter | Added to session: IETF-117: dtn Wed-1630 |
2023-07-10
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05 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-05.txt |
2023-07-10
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05 | Rick Taylor | New version approved |
2023-07-10
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05 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-07-10
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05 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-05-12
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04 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-04.txt |
2023-05-12
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04 | Rick Taylor | New version approved |
2023-05-12
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04 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-05-12
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04 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-05-11
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03 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-03.txt |
2023-05-11
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03 | Rick Taylor | New version approved |
2023-05-11
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-05-11
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03 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-04-14
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02 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-02.txt |
2023-04-14
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02 | Robert Sparks | Forced post of submission |
2023-04-14
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02 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-04-14
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02 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2023-03-25
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01 | Edward Birrane | Added to session: IETF-116: dtn Tue-0030 |
2023-03-13
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01 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-01.txt |
2023-03-13
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01 | (System) | New version approved |
2023-03-13
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01 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Edward Birrane , Rick Taylor , dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2023-03-13
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01 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |
2022-11-07
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00 | Rick Taylor | This document now replaces draft-taylor-dtn-ipn-update instead of None |
2022-11-07
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00 | Rick Taylor | New version available: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-00.txt |
2022-11-07
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00 | Rick Taylor | WG -00 approved |
2022-11-07
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00 | Rick Taylor | Set submitter to "Rick Taylor ", replaces to draft-taylor-dtn-ipn-update and sent approval email to group chairs: dtn-chairs@ietf.org |
2022-11-07
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00 | Rick Taylor | Uploaded new revision |